Ok I am re reading,, here's my take so far;
1.(7) Ruderalis as MJ, not hemp,,,,, are they taking it that all autos are pure Ruderalis?
4.(1)(a) Sales up to an once permitted and/or 8 grams concentrate by individuals,,, I dont see how they expect this to work, when I was selling an Oz was the largest ask for, and I sold them all day. What about that 15% tax?
4.(b)(i) and (ii) allows one to keep all their harvest, not just 8 Oz,,, I like this
4.(1)(e) transporting live plants only for testing, manufacturing and donation,,,, I see no provision to purchase and take home any live plant, nor do I see it prohibited.
It's not perfect, but it'll do if it passes!